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CELPIP Speaking Task 7: Expressing Opinions

CELPIP Speaking Task 7 Sample Answer: History Education and Focus on Wars

By David

Express your opinion on whether school history classes emphasize wars too much. Think about balance in topics and student interest.

Preparation
30 seconds
Speaking
90 seconds
Structure
Opinion, reasons, conclusion

The question

Express your opinion on whether school history classes emphasize wars too much. Think about balance in topics and student interest.

Excellent answer (transcript): around CLB 11–12

From my standpoint, the predominant focus on wars within history education risks fostering a narrow understanding of the past. Although wars have undeniably shaped geopolitical landscapes, an overemphasis on conflict can marginalize equally significant developments in art, philosophy, economics, and social progress. Diversifying historical narratives not only enriches students’ comprehension but also cultivates critical thinking and empathy. Therefore, curricula should be thoughtfully restructured to integrate multifaceted perspectives, offering a more comprehensive and stimulating learning experience.

75 words

Good answer (transcript): around CLB 7–8

I feel that history education often concentrates heavily on wars, which might overshadow other important aspects such as cultural achievements, social movements, and scientific discoveries. While understanding wars is necessary, a more balanced curriculum could provide students with a broader perspective and keep them more engaged by covering diverse topics that shaped human history.

54 words

Basic answer (transcript): around CLB 4–5

Yes, I think history classes talk a lot about wars. It can be sad and scary. Schools should teach more about other things like inventions and culture. This way, students learn about many things, not only fighting.

37 words

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