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CELPIP Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

CELPIP Writing Task 1 Sample Answer: Proposal for Community Garden

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You want to propose the creation of a community garden in your neighborhood.

Time
27 minutes
Length
150–200 words
Tone
Formal or semi-formal, depending on the reader

The question

You want to propose the creation of a community garden in your neighborhood.

Write an email to the local authorities. Your email should include:

-The benefits of a community garden.

-How it would help residents.

-A request for approval or support.

Excellent answer: around CLB 11–12

Dear [City Official’s Name], I am writing to propose the establishment of a community garden in [Neighborhood Name]. A well-maintained garden would provide residents with access to fresh produce, promote environmental awareness, and foster a stronger sense of community. We are seeking city approval to allocate a public space for this project. Additionally, funding assistance for initial supplies and educational workshops would greatly enhance its success. I would love the opportunity to discuss this proposal in more detail. Thank you for your consideration. Sincerely, [Your Full Name]

87 words

Good answer: around CLB 7–8

Dear [City Representative], I hope you are well. I would like to propose the creation of a community garden in [Neighborhood Name]. This project would provide fresh produce, promote healthy living, and create a sense of community. Many residents are interested in participating, but we need an approved space and some basic funding. Would it be possible to discuss this idea further? I appreciate your consideration. Best regards, [Your Name]

70 words

Basic answer: around CLB 4–5

Dear City Council, I am writing to suggest starting a community garden in our neighborhood. This would be a great way for residents to grow fresh vegetables and spend time outdoors. A garden would also bring the community together and encourage healthy eating. Would it be possible to provide a space for this project? Thank you for your time! Best regards, [Your Name]

63 words

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