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CELPIP Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

CELPIP Writing Task 1 Sample Answer: Request for Remote Work Policy

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Your company does not have a clear remote work policy, and you would like to request one.

Time
27 minutes
Length
150–200 words
Tone
Formal or semi-formal, depending on the reader

The question

Your company does not have a clear remote work policy, and you would like to request one.

Write an email to your manager. Your email should include:

-Why remote work is beneficial.

-The challenges faced without a remote work policy.

-A request for a structured policy.

Excellent answer: around CLB 11–12

Dear [Manager’s Name], I hope you are doing well. Given the evolving workplace landscape, I believe it would be beneficial to establish a clear remote work policy for our company. Research has shown that remote work can enhance productivity and employee satisfaction while reducing overhead costs. Without a formalized policy, employees face uncertainty about remote work expectations. I propose creating a structured policy outlining eligibility, communication expectations, and performance tracking. I would be happy to assist in drafting recommendations. I appreciate your time and consideration. I look forward to your thoughts on this matter. Sincerely, [Your Full Name]

98 words

Good answer: around CLB 7–8

Dear [Manager’s Name], I hope you are doing well. I wanted to bring up the possibility of introducing a structured remote work policy. Many employees have found that working from home improves productivity and work-life balance. Currently, the lack of a formal policy creates confusion about when remote work is permitted. Establishing clear guidelines would ensure fairness and efficiency. I would love to discuss this further and hear your thoughts. Best regards, [Your Name]

74 words

Basic answer: around CLB 4–5

Dear [Manager’s Name], I hope you are doing well. I am writing to request a remote work policy for our company. Many employees, including myself, believe that working from home sometimes would help us be more productive. Without a clear policy, it is difficult to know when we are allowed to work remotely. Could we have a set policy that explains the rules? I appreciate your consideration. Best regards, [Your Name]

71 words

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