CELPIP Writing Task 2: Responding to Survey Questions

CELPIP Writing Task 2 Sample Answer: Public Health and Obesity Prevention

Rising obesity rates threaten public health and increase healthcare costs. Communities are searching for the best methods to promote healthy lifestyles and prevent disease.

Time

26 minutes

Length

150–200 words

Structure

Choose Option A or B and support it

The question

Rising obesity rates threaten public health and increase healthcare costs. Communities are searching for the best methods to promote healthy lifestyles and prevent disease.

Which intervention should the city pursue to prevent obesity? What’s your opinion?

- Option A: Require calorie counts on menus at all restaurants and fast food outlets.

- Option B: Launch a public awareness campaign featuring exercise challenges and nutrition tips.

Please choose one option and explain your preference.

Write about 150-200 words.

Excellent answer: around CLB 11–12

Requiring calorie counts on restaurant menus (Option A) is a practical, evidence-based step toward reducing obesity. This measure empowers individuals to make informed food decisions at the point of purchase. Although awareness campaigns are valuable, clear labeling provides a consistent, everyday reminder that influences behavior directly.

46 words

Good answer: around CLB 7–8

Adding calorie information to menus would help people make healthier choices, especially when they are eating at restaurants. While public campaigns about healthy living are helpful, not everyone pays attention. Menu labels reach everyone who eats out, making it easier to eat smart.

43 words

Basic answer: around CLB 4–5

I think restaurants should put calorie numbers on their menus. People eat out a lot, and this helps them know how healthy their food is. If we see calories, we can pick better meals. I think this will make a difference, so I choose option A.