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CELPIP Writing Task 1: Writing an Email

CELPIP Writing Task 1 Sample Answer: Feedback on New Recycling Program

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Your city recently introduced a new recycling program, and you would like to share your feedback.

Time
27 minutes
Length
150–200 words
Tone
Formal or semi-formal, depending on the reader

The question

Your city recently introduced a new recycling program, and you would like to share your feedback.

Write an email to the city council. Your email should include:

-What you liked about the program.

-Any difficulties or challenges faced.

-Suggestions for improvement.

Excellent answer: around CLB 11–12

Dear [City Council Representative], I am writing to commend the city on implementing the new recycling program. This initiative is a positive step toward environmental sustainability. However, I have identified some areas for improvement. Firstly, many residents have expressed confusion about proper sorting due to inconsistent labeling on bins. A public awareness campaign, including clear signage and an updated website, would be beneficial. Secondly, increasing the frequency of recycling pickups, particularly in high-density areas, would prevent overflow issues. Thank you for your commitment to environmental preservation. I look forward to seeing these improvements. Sincerely, [Your Full Name]

97 words

Good answer: around CLB 7–8

Dear City Council, I appreciate the launch of the new recycling program, as it encourages people to be more eco-friendly. Many residents, including myself, are eager to participate. However, I have encountered some difficulties. The bins provided are too small for larger households, and there is limited information on what can be recycled. An educational campaign or clearer guidelines would be helpful. I hope you consider these suggestions. Thank you for your efforts in making our city greener. Best regards, [Your Name]

82 words

Basic answer: around CLB 4–5

Dear City Council, I am happy that our city has started a new recycling program. It is great to see more efforts to protect the environment. However, I noticed that some bins are not clearly labeled, making it confusing to know where to put items. Also, the pickup schedule is unclear. Could you add clearer labels and send a schedule to residents? Thank you for your hard work. Best regards, [Your Name]

72 words

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